so, still enjoying this... i have a complaint again, but its not really directed at you...
its just, how could ANYONE at the school really believe Malfoy wanted to borrow something from Ron. I'm sure even Trelawny(sp?) knows they hate each other... even if Pomphrey(sp?) didn't know about Malfoy and Ron specifically, she had to know of the bad blood between Slytherins and Gryffindors...
it's just strange that she fell for that load of crap....