I'm hooked on this story. I look forward to more - soon I hope. I don't usually read unfinished stories, because so many get abandoned. I will continue to look for updates on this one.
Thank you
Author's response
Thank you johnapple.
One of my pet peeves is that authors abandon their stories in the middle. Nothing more frustrating than to read a wonderful fic to chapter whatever and then find it just…gone. I feel that if an author begins a story, he or she is obligated to finish it.
That’s why I usually make sure the story is half or more than half done before I begin to post. JEDI POTTER was an exception, and most of it was written on the fly. Very wearing, that.
Alorkin