Great story! Mostly great chapter. I'm really liking your characterizations for the most part, only one thing bothering me...What on earth were you thinking by having Harry give Hermione 'unrestricted access' to a starship??? Ok, he loves her, ok, she's a bit mature for a 6 year old, but, she's a 6 year old!! I wouldn't give a 6 year old unrestricted access to a bicycle, let alone something like a starship. Other than that, I love the story. Thanks!
Author's response
Hello, mjames.
Yeah, that might have been a mistake, but seeing as how Hermione won’t ever be aboard without Harry, it’s a moot point. In addition, ‘Mione is a self aware computer who controls every aspect of the My Little. She’s smart enough to not blindly follow orders that would endanger herself, Harry, Hermione…or the planet.
Alorkin