i've read this several times already, it's that good. now, this may be overstepping boundaries, but i keep imagining it as a manga and i'd love your permission to make it into one...please? if you want a sample of my art, you can go here: http://hyper-maniac33.deviantart.com/gallery/
uh, try to focus on the more recent ones...i used to be terrible
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Sorry for the late response! That would be really cool! Go for it!