Though your story hasn't rated very high over the last year, I think it has a lot of potential. I think we should rein in the "Empress" just a bit and make Harry more of the central character but, otherwise, I look forward to your next update.
Author's response
I'm glad that you're enjoying it, but if I do write more parts, I've got my ideas on how to do it. I think you'll enjoy them, but the Empress really is a very important part of the story.