Damn. I have this strange feeling that Eroninja II might take a The Empire Strikes back tone.
As for the eights tails, before Yoruichi thought about it, I had an inkling that even if it took human form, it would wish to stay wish Bee. Heck, also keep him out of trouble by effectively smacking him across the head. The length of time they have worked together as well would ensure their synergy.
Naruto and Kiyomi are working together steadily. I was really glad about that scene. I haven't seen the poll yet but I'll definitely vote.
You might want to update your journal vol 1 though. Looking forward to chap 43.