Hate mail? Bah, you're not even worth it. Why start this fic if you actually have no ideas at all. Wanting help is fine and all but... well, first chapter is all about stats and prologue. There's no substances at all. You should at least have planned around five chapters with lemons which the driving factor of this fic. Wanting help when you're not even that far... Yeah, my advice. If you have no idea what you're going to write past the first chapter and needing help on ideas(really, who cares about outfits!?), then you might as well stop writing to save yourself and us the trouble.
Author's response
You know what, I'm getting fucking tired of fuck panty-waisted virgins like you telling me how to write my fucking story! If you think you can do better, then fucking well do it!! Don't sit there telling me how to write when you don't have even one god damn story to your name! Over 6,000 people have read my story, I'm sure some of them didn't like it, but I'm also positive most of them did. so as soon as you have a story that has over 6000 views you can come back and talk your shit but until then, GTFO & TAKE YOUR FAIL WITH YOU!!!