Wooooo this is awesome! Handsome gentlemen brawling! That's like my favorite thing!
So I'm guessing this isn't the chapter following the first one? :D Doesn't matter, I like this! Adrian is a bit of a poopoo-head, isn't he? I love all this drama so much.
Saw some typos, but no big deal. I haven't really much else to say :D Very good chapter.
By the way, what you responded to my review in the beginning chapter, I feel like on this site, original stories don't really get much credit. And there's nothing wrong with sticking to the fandom part of Ficwad, but I think people are really missing out when they don't give the original section a chance...
Author's response
I know. Gotta love a good fight :P
Um, no. lol I'm working on that one. And yes. He's a hot headed cholo. Like most of em are.
I know. I don't have autocorrect on this thing.
And no, they don't. But I do read some of them because they're actually good. But some can be really, not well written.
Thanks.
-Andrea