Hi! So interesting update. I would love a full written out encounter of just Em and her mum but I don't know whether you should cause it could end up getting pretty awkward and/or violent. I like how accepting Donna is, she's lovely. It was funny and well written as usual and I really liked it. Other than that, it was a fairly uneventful chapter and not much seemed to happen. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. I'm also upto date with your story Affection and Genocide which I will review on there. I really love that story too and must compliment you on your versitality and ability to portray different characters in different stories.
Author's response
I was planning on making the next chapter eventful, but damn - I suck at action! I just can't seem to make things short, you know.. I wish I would learn that. I end up writing 24 long chapters that pretty much hold the events that could fit in two.
I'm kind of at a very low self-esteem/write's block point right now hahah.. Sometimes I wish I could hand the story over to someone more capable of writing it, and tell her all the twists and turns that I had in mind, leaving it to her to actually put in on paper. Or Microsoft Word, more likely.