Can you please answer my question from almost twos years ago? It is bugging the crap out of me not knowing the answer. This is the greatest story I have ever readon in my 7 years of reading stories of all genres. Please finish darn it. XO
Author's response
Hey, it's been ages since I've last been here. Do you mean this question below?
"His torso arches back from the bed as the two men approach him and he flails his restrained limbs, struggles more violently.
How does his torso arch back from the bed? Is he on his stomche? If he is on his back how does his stomache arch off the bed?"
If so, I should clarify that he's on his back. His back arches as he's lying on the bed, I guess I didn't use a good enough phrase to clarify that.
You know what, I have had this story all planned out in my head for years now. I just didn't have the time, and then the motivation to finish it. I still come back to it from time to time, I actually wrote a big part of the next chapter (probably lost it by now).
I don't know, I might finish this one some day soon, because I really liked writing it.