Okay. I gotta be honest with you.
It got too horrifying for me to finish tonight. But. The writing is actually really amazing (even though you've got some wickedly awful stuff planned for poor Craig). Your writing really makes me want to keep reading it, though I'll probably have nightmares...
JUST KEEP WRITING, MAN. You're gifted! Not many people these days can write legit stories. Cheers to you. :D
I can't wait to see what else you can write.