Loved the chapter but wasn't as amazed as the last chapter probably because of the more abrupt cliffhanger.
So Kiyomi is the one who controls the immortality aspect? Interesting. Feel like there's a lot of power that Kiyomi has but Naruto is able to assert his authority so I'm not worried about that conflict of power being anything major. Unless you have something up your sleeve....
I guess since Shion is going to live forever she won't need another daughter.
Anyway looking forward to Mito's joining. Can't wait for Sara's chapter as well.