Good chapter I am just hoping for more you have a good story here and I am hoping you continue with it.
Now Remus is an arse in this last part of this story and now is trying to be a bit nicer after running his mouth at Harry and Hermione and is lucky Harry did go all fire and brimstone on his arse then you have Bill kicking the shit out of him for his lack of brains. He then thinks, like Ron, he can say sorry and Harry will forgive him. That is not going to happen this is not the same mushroom Harry Potter he used to know. Marrying Hermione and spending this time away from the others has made him more mature and smarter. Can't wait to see how you handle him meeting the Grangers and then Voldysnort.