Hoping you are planning on another part past this it is very good and I think you have some room to go on and make it longer than two parts. I liked how you did most of this and think you did a good job with the characters. I agree with some of the reviews I read you seem to have the adults fine they are sleeping together in the last fic but in this one they are all worried about it. Then you also have Fleur giving Bill a pass for more or less causing Harry and Hermione to have to rush out of the party when it was all his fault Dumbles found out about it. Saying I don't want to lose you should not get him out of this and just because he gave them her apartment in Paris does not excuse his muck up. Again hope you write more this is a good storyline.