Awesome section, and was really enjoying Greyback and his demise, as well as something to see just how out of touch or into his own delusions that Tom had ventured there. Really liked the idea of Harry taking out the last little bits, as well as your portrayal of Hammer (Hammertime!) and her teasing of Amelia, and wonder if there is anyone you think of as you wrote her character, as she just seems awful familiar to me, but I can't place her. Again, another great section, and had a guess, but will wait concerning that movie.
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Heya Wonder!
Greyback: What better way to get rid of someone who gets his jollies from chewing on five year olds? By any definition, he’s someoene who should have been put down long before. (I wonder why he was not?)
Voldemort has always struck me as a few leaves short of a tree.
Delusions like that are common in criminals, especially the violent ones. In his case, he’s very much like Dumbledore. Both are convinced they are omniscient.
Connie: She’s an amalgamation. She was invented by the illustrious Old Crow, who kindly gave me permission to use her, and a few other characters. She’s the friend who will tease you unmercifully, but when the chips are down, is standing right next to you.
Movie: It’s from ‘The Princess Bride’.
Alorkin