First I want to say I'm a fan of your writing! I read Be my detonator so much, its just amazing!
I loved this, your use of imagery is just beautiful. A full picture is painted inside your mind when you read it and its almost as if you are watching it happen and not reading it. This was quite dark but I think that could be why I enjoyed this so much, I always feel that real beauty is in darkness because its not as obvious as the light.
Anyway I love this, I love your writing and I love you and your beautiful mind
Vikki xoxo