(#) rb8 2013-08-30
I wish I knew why everyone was rating you down. The first chapter was a little hard to follow, but the writing and story are better than 80% of the fan fiction out there. Looking forward to more of it.
Author's response
Hello rb8,
thanks for your kind words. In regards to your first sentence, well, I try to be as good as I can. Wait for later chapters to see, whether I can back that promise up... But still, thanks.
Kind regards
rascaldi