Review for JEDI POTTER

JEDI POTTER

(#) NobleK 2013-09-04

"Amelia met him outside. Seeing the bodies she asked: “Casualties?”

“Four.” Harry replied sadly as he handed over the bag. “That’s a touch over one percent.”

“A military victory.”

“A personal tragedy.”
Poor Harry, Luna and Ginny!! The fool got himself killed, I could see that coming a mile off! :-(

Author's response

I left three major clues and half a dozen minor ones and yet, only a few readers guessed what I was going to do. In my defense, I kept their characters as close to canon as possible, and Ron, while a generably likable person, was too unstable to have a weapon like that. And you forgot the twins, Molly, Arthur, Bill, Charlie and Percy.

Alorkin