typo
Harry landed the My Little exactly were they’d departed.
where
Satisfied his charm would no break,
not
on the whole a great story while truly dark dumbledor isn't my favorite you did him reasonably well here
i look forward to what you come up with next
Author's response
Until my spell checker is on line again, I suppose I’ll make more misteaks. I frequently type too fast, though I usually edit a story between three and seven times before I post it, and unfortunately, readers find what I’ve missed. On the bright side, I average only three errors in a thousand words. Overall, that’s .03 percent. For an amateur writer with a day job, that’s not too shabby.
Dark Dumbledore: This is by no means the darkest Dumbledore I’ve imagined.
Alorkin