Hello! It's been a really long time, welcome back and I loved this chapter it was wonderful. Man, what a way to come back. Frank obviously loves Em, this is screwed up, it's almost funny. But you made great progress with chapter. I loved all of Em's internal monologues, they were all done really well. It really felt like you covered a lot of ground, but it also made things more complicated wow this is good. I am looking forward to more. I missed you, stupid.
Author's response
Tragicomedy is, in my mind, what life is all about - now that's not a very good thing but the truth rarely is, ha!
I hope you're going to like the next chapter.. It's pretty long and eventful and - gah, I'm not very happy with it. I tend to lose focus when I get too into writing this shit. I start drifting and nothing makes much sense... I'm gonna proof read it a couple more times but I think I'll put it up tomorrow. I know, it's such a shocker - another chapter and it hasn't even been a full month since the last one! I don't know what's wrong with me... :D
I missed you, too. You're the main reason I feel kind of excited and nervous to update. NOT to downplay the meaning of every single person who has ever read or reviewed the story, just sayin'.. I kinda feel like I have to make you proud, which is a good thing, cause you're pushing me without actually uhm, pushing me. That sounded so much better in my head. I'm babbling. I'll stop now. Check out the update tomorrow?