good history but the final in my opinion was a litle weak maybe some of final confrontiontion of the tree or something like that will be better but is your history not mine
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Heya Master82.
The tree? I wrote it this way on purpose. I’m assuming you refer to the confrontation between Harry and Dumbledore, in which case, it came out exactly as I wanted it. Dumbledore died a useless death, even while trying for immortality. All told, the same thing happened wth Voldy.
Alorkin