The hpfanficarchive/rotary version is someone elses take on what the original author created. The original even though was short was the better of the two stories. The hpfanficarchive/rotary lost the spark that was in the original. On a scale of 1 to 10 the original I would give an 8 maybe a 9. The hpfanficarchive/rotary version I would give a 4.