Review for Firecracker-chan


(#) randumbdave 2013-10-17

Please continue, but try to take it a bit slower and let the plot development seem less forced.

Hinata and Hanabi are an interesting dichotomy; Hinata has a very soft exterior which is wrapped around a core of steel, while Hanabi is much more outgoing, but has hidden insecurities. They're almost like two sides of the same coin.