Personally, I find your writing style better than VFSnake, your grammar is more correct, thus putting you above him in writing skill (it would be ironic if you were someone who speaks English as a second language, because Snake is from the USA and his English sucks hairy goat testicles). I only point the above out to let you know that I will continue to avidly read your story as opposed to Snake's stories, which I end up dropping after 3 or so chapters. Ugh, so hard to read his stuff.