I must say I am enjoying this story alot. I hope to see more from you in the future. It has been a little rough on the spelling at times, but not to the point of making it difficult to read. It has just happened often enough for me to notice. That said I love the fact that you are developing everyone's personality, and showing us how they think. On a lighter note love the more adult bits, and I think you have struck a pretty good balance so far.