I found this story very boring - oddly enough it was more interesting in the beginning than it was once you got to the HP part.
I don't agree with most of the way wizarding America was set up with religious oligarchy and stupidity being the way of the day feasible in the least either.
I quit by the time Sabrina Spellman hooked up with Ron and honestly I'm amazed I made it that far.
Your other stories are much better, and if I hadn't read them before I read this one I probably would have started this up and then avoided you as an author.
I'm glad I read them first.