Love the story and not gonna really give you a bunch of tips since you appear to be a genius and i love seeing where this goes. Curious when your next update is comin? I kinda figure your gonna have a rapid fire update when you do since thats what youve done before is disappear awhile and come back with several new chaps. Anyway I'm waitin not so patiently for future content.
Author's response
My writing computer is currently fucked and I am working on getting it fixed. I wasn't able to save my hard drive, so I lost four of the five chapters I had pre-written. As soon as I am able, I will start working in this story once more