Review for Queen of the Fox Den

Queen of the Fox Den

(#) Shadow-Light 2014-03-16

I'm glad that I was able to help. For the last two parts of your response I honestly would love to read that happen.

As for anyone I would suggest Hinata could face in the next chapter I think either Shizuka, or Juri Han would make for a interesting chapter.

Also I'm on the fence about if increasing Naruto's involvement and if would be a positive, or negative addition to the story. I mean it might add a interesting spark to some of the 'action', but if it is done too much then it could take away from the main focus of the story.

Though thinking about it if you do change the chapter's P.O.V. to show what Naruto is up to with the girls/women of his group might add some good development to the story. Another thing that could do is also keep the other characters Hinata has dominated from being forgotten by the readers.

Now I was wondering if you've considered either using, or creating some sexual/hentai themed jutsu for Hanata to use/encounter during her fights with these rivals?

On a side note if you want to take more about this then please feel free to contact me through my e-mail; all I ask is if you do that you please use this story's name as part of the subject you use to send it so I can know it's you.

Either way I look forward to reading the next chapter when it comes out.

Author's response

i was thinking of doing a side story to show naruto side of this story but he will have get to join in the aftermatch fun or humilation when Hinata gets defeated.

But for now i need to think of her should be her opponent for round 3 as i already decided it has to be a girl around hinata age so shizuka can be the girl for that outfit as i am thinking of a girl from either a crossover or a girl from outside of konoha will be the next girl to face hinata