normally i'd share this via PM but you seem to have pm's turned off... a typo found
to return to Hogwarts were he alerted authorities of the problem.
were here should be where
and a potential typo
After watching them leave Dumbledore turned noticing the copy of the Daily Prophet he had passed Harry to read when he inquired about the reason for the mob burning on the floor where Harry had obviously thrown it.
mob seems like it might have been meant to be mop?
ch2
to appear professional and none threatening.
non
ch3
If it is I would like to know were the one l am currently at is located because the classes are far better.
where
ch4
“What’s going Hermione?” her mother asked in the voice that conveyed
on
“Help? If I’d gone by what that author wrote I’d probably insulted the entire Veela nation during my first conversation.
have? insult?
“So were are the future Aurors suppose to come from?” Harry asked.
where
Then Percy showed up and spend a Hogsmeade weekend with Ron.”
spent
on the publicly know information most were quite good
known
she loved Harry like a brother and hand no desire to bear green eyed children.
had bare?
“It is good to see your up. The healer is here she is currently examining Harry Gabrielle said taking Hermione’s hand as they walked back to Gabrielle and Harry’s rooms.
missing "
Ended up getting some broken bones courtesy of cousin for her trouble.”
my? dudly?
ch5
“Why are here?”
you
wishing he could have barred Percy Weasley, who was representing the minister, for attending but it was well within the minister’s right to hear this.
from
I know how I’d like to proceed from here but I don’t want to go against Harry’s or you wishes.”
your
Therefore as I already have asylum status can we get Harry French citizenship preferable as soon as possible?”
preferably
that particular prophecy was full filled on October 31st 1981.
fulfilled
was using his knowledge of wood and magic to insure our fortifications were safe and secure for our own troops
ensure?
It’s not like their the first pair you’ve seen.”
they're
now sure how he managed that seeing as how Umbridge is the new headmistress and Snape is her deputy.”
not
ch6
“Good going Harry you did much better with her parents than James did with your mother’s. When Hermione was finished hugging her parents
missing "
“I hope your keeping up
you're
before drill a hole dead center on the small end with a tapered hole meeting the base of it from the side of the shaft.
drilling
ch7
“It looks like France will have to more magical citizens soon.”
two
This is a list of all the typos i found again normally i'd share via pm so they could be fixed without being made public but your pm's are off
it's a great story