Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness

To Fight the Coming Darkness

(#) blade87 2006-03-25

i cant say its not written good but i dont like how harrys totaly subservant to snape in the 1st chapter an i couldnt read it after that but other then him being a baby attime its looks really good , but anyway i couldnt read past the 1st chapter so my reveiw isnt about the hole story.

Author\'s Response: Well I hope sometime you read past chapter 1. I wanted to make an independent Harry story, but not one of those where he immediately starts whooping everyone's butt. I want the reader to be able to see his growing independence. -- Jim