Review for Eroninja

Eroninja

(#) HeGotGame 2014-05-29

This was a great chapter. Don't know why all these people are complaining. There were a lot of things that I liked about this chapter.

To be honest, after the last chapter, I never once considered the prospect of Anko 'rehabilitating' Haruna so that she could become one of Naruto's lovers in earnest, rather than via a proxy (through Anko), even a distinct possibility. It's not a stretch for me to say that to hear the S&M woman say as much was a pleasant development. It'll be very interesting to see how she goes about it, and if it does indeed occur, how long the rehabilitative processes take.

Naruto's capture definitely makes sense considering the sequence of events that took pace prior to its occurrence. When he saw Chiriku's concern for Sora, his perceptions were colored, and they were only cemented by Sora's acting, which, as was said in-chapter, reminded Naruto of himself when he accesses four-tails worth of chakra. Fudo's timely appearance was the final nail in the coffin. Also, his capture served as a great opportunity for Fuka to fall under his influence by siphoning his chakra, which is still laced with the Tempation's Touch, not to mention the fact that she no longer has that freaky soul-housed-in-her-hair bit; so, great job with that.

So next chapter will be a rehashing of that clone, D's, escapades. Interesting that he was betrayed by a henged Kurotsuchi; looks like she pulled off what Maki couldn't, which was kill 'Naruto' after making love. I can't wait for the next chapter, as well as what Naruto himself will do armed with the knowledge that his clone transferred to him upon its death. Looking forward to it.