I'm no sure how I feel about this chapter. The problem is I just can't see it happening. Your Naruto is by far stronger, more powerful, and much smarter then his counterpart. You had him prove as much when he was talking about Chiriku's motivation for not sharing everything he knew... and yet you then had him blow his previous words to the wind and made him act stupid again, which resulted in his getting caught.
Now, I want it made clear. It's not that he was caught that bothers me, but how it happened. There's simply no way Naruto would have let this happen the way you'd made it happen. I was forced to suspend my reality of disbelief for this chapter, and even then I still failed and couldn't believe.