My god, I can't believe no one reviewed this. This is...too beautiful for words, even if this fic is quite old and now we all know how it went, this is still a wonderful piece of work. Loved every single word of it, literally, and you kept them in-character, and I think it takes a lot to handle such strong characters.
Anyway, thank you for this!
Author's response
That's one of the reasons I didn't post most of my fics on FicWad- I don't think people were reading this site much even back then. All my fics are over on LJ under the same account name, sunflower1343.
Thanks for your nice words about this. I love writing from Asami's POV. He's a struggle to keep in character, but it's always been fun to try to make him.