(#) thro 2014-07-30
It was an enjoyable story. The idea was a good one but execution wasn't perfect. You rambled on about how evil Albus was a bit too much, had Harry tell his life story and hear how much everyone was enraged much too often and didn't make the Death Eaters or Voldemort formidable enemies.
I don't understand why Ron was held in reverence at the end when he acted stupidly and exactly not like a Jedi. I also don't believe that a Ron Luna coupling would have ever worked and I simply don't understand why you had them married and pregnant.
However it had lightsabres.