Don't be so self critical, this chapter was excellent. It had exactly what was needed and wasn't filled with unnecessary things to pad it out.
This story is shaping up to be something really special, I can't wait to read more. Frank's reluctance towards human interaction is saddening but also understandable and it makes for a very insightful read. Gerard's curiosity and determination is interesting too and I look forward to seeing where this story goes.
Another rating point for you lovely.
Vikki xo