Review for The Pride

The Pride

(#) jupmod 2014-08-19

Okay... So Naruto will not form a shinobi village. He'll just 'protect' the territory of his Pride, the Land of Sun. Just how will this change the world for the better? I only see more wars in the years ahead as Sasuke and other nations will fight to get hid of Naruto and the Sun Country. The only way toward peace IMO would be for Naruto to seduce other women in positions of power, like Temari in Suna and Mei in Kiri. Yet if he's not going to do that, again how will he change the world?

Anyway, that mystery aside, I can see you're making Temari open for Naruto to add her to his Pride in the future. She's not attach to Shikamaru and Suna no longer allies with Konoha. I hope this is the case, given I like for Temari to join Naruto's Pride. :)

Well, Kayo is now part of Naruto's Pride. Very hot scene of her being fucked outdoors in the middle of the night. Quite erotic and romantic. :)

Next chapter I'm guessing would be Shion judging from the title of the chapter. I await for it. :)

Author's response

Thanks for the comments.

Peace isn't Naruto's goal in this story. In my view after two years of trying to prevent the world from tearing itself apart even Naruto would eventually step back and say have at it. The Pride Naruto's goal is simply to establish a land where his family can be safe. If the rest of the world burns then so be it as it would be a path they have chosen.

As to Naruto seducing women let's just say that if Naruto takes a woman, then he literally takes her. This should be made clearer when one of your two favorite kunoichi is added to the Pride.