Hi lemon sage
i'm very intrested to your story
you know, i'm very hate sasuke & kakashi in manga
Isn't fair, sasuke almost have everything
and in another hand, naruto almost unlucky,he's the yondaime son. And yet is like nothing
You know, i really like conflict in your story, but don't make sasuke like "he can do anything he want"
It's like sasuke can manipulated everyone very easy
What i want really say is make naruto have politic support from another
And you know, all of the story contain lemon
you are the best story i ever read
I'm sorry for language & runt
Good luck