Started reading This story just a week ago liked the first few chapter and was ecstatic that Naruto was shooing Suckura like the bitch she is but damn you, you included her in the Harem that was the major turn off (I seriously wonder why cant people see its crystal clear that Suckura wont ever love Naruto like a lover). but having nothing to do continued reading some chapter were good some were better but majority lemons and Ideas were copied from some porn or Tv soaps. like the multiple personality disorder and fandance from Castle, the titjob of tifa from hentai and mamy more. all in its just the plot is your (or taken from somewhere else). I give your story 2.5/5 not more not less. hope you kill Suckura soon by the hands of Sasugay so that Naruto would kill him. AND LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST JIRAIYA DOESNOT APPROVES YOUR STORY AS IT IS CHEAP COPY OF OTHER PORN AND JIRAIYA WANTS ORIGINALITY.
Author's response
Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts. Truthfully though if you are going to issue the charge that something is copied it might be better to actually use examples then just throwing out generic statements. For example, I have no idea why you think the fan dance would be stolen from a TV show. The Fan dance for example is a type of erotic dance that goes back to 1800's in the West. Castle was hardly the first to use it nor will it be the last. As to everything else well it's hard to take someone serious when they describe people as Suckura or Sasugay. Sorry, but that to me is just show you are already predisposed to judging something rather unfairly. Fanfiction is a place where even a character you don't like should be allowed to grow or fall in the setting of the story. Not to just say well she could never grow or change.