I thought this story was amazing throughout!! I know it's like a couple of years too late, but I absolutely love this story so much. You should be so proud because this is definitely original in every single way(no pun intended) you should seriously consider publishing this!! It made me cry unbelievably!! I'm still sad right now from thinking about the way Gee killed himself for Frank. Oh here I go again. I made this account specifically to write this review. Thank you so much for this amazing story- amazing is an understatement. Thank you once again. Btw I live in England!! Woahhh