I've loved it all, and I'm eager for more. I would rather have more depth and interaction with the cast you have than to add more principals.
I struggle with the HP world flashbacks; I like how they're written, but I have no framework for the noncanon aspects. Do I need to read your other stories to understand the Hogwarts side of the xover??
And: smut, please!
Author's response
You don't have to read any of my other stories out of obligation, though some of them make for a great time-killer.
I tried writing a timeline and other miscellaneous notes for this story so far, to lessen confusion - http://rihaansfics.wordpress.com/2015/01/05/harry-and-harley-chapter-10-notes-faqs/
Hope that clears things up - if it doesn't, I'm gonna have to re-write it.
Thanks for reviewing!