I like this so far, no showing off too much, but not hiding to much either, I like the whole Naru/Ino/Hinata/Tenten/Fem Kyuu too, actually I never minded harem stories, after all the Uzumaki clan deserves to be brought back a hell of a lot more then the PINK EYE clan. Naruto has shadow clones and a god-like amount of stm. so it's very possible, anyway the ONLY thing I would like to add is he needs to get the hell off of team 7. Shino's dad should be able to get him and Kiba traded, I think that works quite well.