The goblin battle and the battle with Fleur were quite well done and very exciting. I am sorry to see Fleur die at Harry's hand. I am sure there will be some repercussions because of it. Keep up the great work. I am following both this and Bungle and hope to updates soon.
Author's response
Glad you liked it. Chapter 27 is up now and I am working on chapter 16 of Bungle.~Jim