Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness

To Fight the Coming Darkness

(#) Alatoic01 2006-11-27

Quite an excelent chapter!!

Love the talk of Susan and Harry they really complement.

I can see that Voldemort is really trying to retake control and make people know he is still a force to fear. It will be interesting of one of the atack was stoped by Neville and his Greatgrandfather, that will be cool.

Its sad that you have to kill Fleur, are you sure that its not posible from her to regenerate the damage? after all she was super-pumped in Vela magic.

Dobby make the ultimate sacrifice for his master, quite moving. He will be missed and I hope Harry find another friend and servant like him soon.

I can't wait to see the fight between Snape and Harry, I am sure the manor will help him with atacks, traps and power, but it will be amazing, I just hope Snape suffer a defeat so he return to his master in shame(or dead).



Author's response

Wait no longer. Chapter 27 is up. Hope you enjoy.~Jim