Well, you've done it again. You've captivated me with another story. I literally read all 5 chapters in one sitting, which is a lot for me. At first I thought Jackson was Collette's son. But then he was calling her CoCo, so then I didn't think he was hers. After I found out Collette has brown eyes and Jackson has blue eyes--like his mother--I definitely knew he wasn't hers. It's all coming together. I really like the suspense and uncertainty. But I'm nervous because I know Keifer will make an official appearance, but Patrick will save the day...right?
Do we have to go? Did the bad people find us?" he asked sounding worried.
I know this is terrible, but I kind of giggled at that because it so reminded me of the movie "Kindergarten Cop" when Dominick was trying to rig up some lasers to protect him and his mom from "the bad people." OK, now I'm rambling. Great story so far. :)
Author's response
I totally didn't think of Kindergarted Cop until you posted that. HA HA HA! That just reminds me of Arnold going: Who is your Daddy, and what does he do? HA HA HA!
Hang in there, the drama will continue! Thanks for the review!