I hate to say this, but I'm really bored. The story started out well, but it's become a Standard Training Fic. Dumbledore's a moron who's outthought on every front. Voldemort's a moron who repeatedly gets addicted to drugs. Everyone's an idiot except Our Black Hole Sue Hero, who can do no wrong and trains for a year. That's all well and good, but it's boring as hell to read. I kept hoping for the story to go somewhere other than "and then they trained for another week, and two more people made lightsabers", but that's really all there is to the story. Hermione is Harry's yes-girl and fuck-puppet, and everyone else are just hollow shadows. There's no characters worth reading about in this, no conflict, no actual danger to any named hero. It's a boring self-insert. I really like Star Wars/Potter crossovers, with Darth Marrs and Tsu Doh Nimh having the best I've seen so far. But this one... as much as I wanted to like it, I haven't, and I don't even care how Harry wins, because it won't be an epic fight when it took 20+ chapters of training to get there.