Ok, I have read this story and find it to be a bit confusing. It's like you tore it up then tried to paste it back together incorrectly.
On ff.net i found a story similar to this story called ultimate experiment: weapon x. Was this your original story or not?
Author's response
I've never heard of that one. I wrote my original based off Fan of Fanfics Weapon X, but I had to rewrite it before putting it up here because he changed his mind about letting me use his story as a basis.