Well here we go. Let me start off with the basics. First of all i really, really enjoy your story immensely. Usually i don't take the time to write reviews but i felt the need to comment on this (anything but) little gem. I'm actually still a bit euphoric, because i started reading this story a few years ago on another site. I already thought this story was discontinued, and decided more or less on a whim to google it and found it here with 20+ new chapters. So after tearing through the new content i'm sitting here writing this useless rambling. But enough of that. Let's get to actually commenting. I simply love what you are doing with this story. I don't think i ever read a harem story that i enjoyed that much. You are staying, as far as i can tell, very truthfull and respectful to nearly all characters, which, even now, i still find hard to believe with a 50+ harem. Sure you have to bent a charecter sometimes but thats only natural in a story of this magnitude. But this is still the most tasteful harem story i ever read. Even more impressive is, in my opinion, the development of the world and the characters' reactions. You managed to give this story a very original spin while seamlessly incorporating canon and the movies. I am really looking forward to the next chapters and how everything will develop, with the only downside being that it will take a while with your other stories. I think it works so well because you really take the time to flesh out the charaecters and especially the world. So all in all i am really impressed with your writing. I tip my hat, sir.
If i had to mention anything negative it would have to be your grammer. Now first of all, let me say that english is not my first language, so this could actually be my own lack of grammatical knowledge. But i have the feeling that sometime sentences are not structured the right way. Again, could only be my mistake, if so i sincerely apologize. but if i'm right, i'm just annoyed that such a superb story has such a minor inconvenience to its name. So to come (finally) to a close, i am a big fan, keep the good work up. The gallant sage of Mt. myoboku would be proud. (BTW am i the only one who is annoyed that jiraiya is the only sannin that actually died by the end of naruto?)
Sincerly, yours,
a fan