Great story! Easy to follow and a joy to read. My only regret about it was the murder of Hedwig. I really like that owl. I'm not really surprised that in the end Harry married both Hermione and Luna. Nor that Harry sort of faded into the background of history. He never truly was one to seek the limelight. Nor was the fact that none of their children attended Hogwarts. It's a damn interesting read and pulls the reader in demanding to be read. With all that said I now say to continue writing as you, at least to me, show a good talent for story telling.