Review for Eroninja

Eroninja

(#) kingjubi10 2016-01-03

Another great chapter man. I'm really impressed at your writing ability, you churn out 20k or more chapters every month, while I have trouble with a 5k one.

Also it's impressive that you use people from past chapters like Taji'so former best friend in this chapter as a possible way to introduce her as a enemy; since what you have said so far doesn't really portray her as an ally.

And the Four Kings, both the Cult one and the one I was is possibly making, simply amazing. While you mentioned in the story that Yoshino thinks it could possible Iwa feeding people Bijuu flesh, is it possible that it has to do with the Zero Tail creatures?

It's been awhile since Kabuto has shown up, while I don't like him, I want to see him in terms story again. And Naruto'so sister and the Rinnegan girl, haven't seen them in a few chapter. With so many characters it must be difficult to keep track of the story at times.

Um what else did I want to say? Oh yea, the competition that Naruto'so company is now experience, very realistic even if it sucks. They are going have to do something about that if they want to make the money for their goals. Maybe a little assassination, wink wink.

I don't like the sound of that huge bald Inuzuka, can remember his name. I agree with Yugao it sounds like he has plans that extended from outside his clan. You should take him out too, lol.