Well... Honestly, Moegi is consider 'innocent' by most fans, given Naruto knew her when she was 8 years old (Note: Moegi is 4 years younger than Naruto, not 2.). Even I just can not think of her as a romantic partner given she was a child when Naruto first met her.
Hanabi Hyuuga is different. I have no problems with her, given Naruto had not ever met her (in canon) when she was a child, thus she is not 'innocent' as Moegi is. This is why we have a lot of fanfics, art, and even hentai of Naruto/Hanabi.
Hmmm... I sure hope Mirajane does get to laid with Naruto. I always love the idea of Mirajane (from Fairy Tail) with Naruto. I know this is not the FT Mira you have in Eroninja, yet you sure are making her look and act like Mira given now Mirajane is working at a bar. Maybe Mira will get her dream come true soon. :)
Anyway, nice chapter. I know you're now aiming to have Naruto deflower Moegi and have her join the harem. Yet IMO, it would be better to have Hanabi join and not Moegi. (shrug)
Well, until next chapter! :)